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Saturday 21 January 2017

Be my Val by Grace Junkie





Three words that mark the beginning of something great
      That also marks the beginning of the end
     So Be my V.A.L
   
      My
   
      V-Vessel of
   
      A-Appreciated
   
      L-Lust
      Valentine and its colours, red and white complete
      Valentines day.....Red stains on white bedsheets
      oh saint Valentine, your plan was to join people and give
      them hope for the morrow
      But hundreds of years down the line, your day has become that
      which begins people's sorrow
      Your day walks by and in its trail leaves petals of withered
      flowers
      A pathway of deflowered flowers
      ........and I'll like to marry my wife a virgin
   
      The bible says weeping endures for the night but joy comes in
      the morning
      But on Valentines, joy lasts for the night and weeping in the
      morning.
      Because the hours together at the valentine night were years
      in disguise
      Now it morning he's left her with tears in her eyes
      Her consciousness is awoken
      But its too late, the seal has been broken
      So its V.A.L
for
      V-Verily
   
      A- All's
   
      L- Lost
   
      With all these one could say valentine is evil
      But Jesus took it to another level
      He bled Red on the Cross and made my sins snow White
      Thus, the colours of valentine
      Red and White
      So be my V.A.L
      Because
   
      V-Verily
   
      A- All's
   
      L- Love.

19 comments:

  1. Wow! Short and precise. Kudos #GraceJunkie

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  2. Interesting piece. Nice rhymes

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  3. Dope, fucking dope!!!Grace junkie

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  4. All true, so cool how you went from pointing out all the negativity in valentine to defining valentine with the cross. True poetry

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  5. Now this is so symbolic...."red stains on white bed sheets". Thats cool

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  6. Though short but will have long lasting impact

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  7. Poetry, ministry, counselling, enlightenment. All contained in this piece. Impressive

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  8. Incredible choice of words and phrases, no beating about the bush. Great job

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  9. More grease to your elbows #Gracejunkie

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  10. To be sincere, this is one of the best piece I've seen and read this year. The diction was on point.

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  11. It's an interesting an piece, great job done here..

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  12. Now this is #Word. My Yoruba people call it Oro

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  13. Gracias Gracejunkie. This is ministration

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  14. Awesome,its a job well done!

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  15. victoria osareme27 January 2017 at 06:14

    This is REALITY the plain truth.I really loved d way u juxtaposed the negative n positive side.Pple need to see this.More grace Gracejunkie as we learn and are impacted thru ur words.

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  16. Omg!!! Dis is more than impressive, dope job, good job grace junkie

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  17. Omg!!! Dis is more than impressive, dope job, good job grace junkie

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